How my Double Page Spread was made

The main changes I have made to this are of the white box placement, as originally they were central and wider, but I soon realised that the fold in the page would deteriorate the look and style of my magazine, so I have moved them to the side, making them thinner and longer. I have also changed the font to a similar, but bolder font, as from my peer surveys I found they struggled to read the writing at the top, so being a vital piece of information to the page, I changed it keeping to the house style but making it bolder and clearer to read. On my second survey, the issue did not occur again and they found it easy to read.